it is as with
you cover yourself
naked of home
stranger to all.
you shelter from
the sharp cold
in the shard
One Shoot Sunday @ One Stop Poetry
the shard of indifference i point...what a strong ending to a fantastic poem..very few words - but spot on
I was just going to post those same words ~ shard ~ point ~ really stabbed ~ cutting ~ shard of indifferece ~ very nicely tied together in so little packs a powerful punch
Abby, this deserves so much more than three comments. It's true, this photo made me think of being nameless, unbelonging. You did such a good job of bringing it to life.
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